So Far Gone

Why do you suffer? With that hole in your heart. Why do you love the pain terribly? Letting it control  your selfish brain.

The pain consumes itself as you let it linger with the oxygen you consume. Numbing your senses, so you might as well sleep forever. The world you live in is a big cage of bad decisions, so you prefer to live inside a dream.

Nothing but heartache and obsession, you wrote her plans and poetry, but the woman of your dreams will never desire a man like you or see what you can do.

So you’ve decide to live life as if you’re dead. You made it 30 years and with sad eyes, you let it all take away your breath.


One thought on “So Far Gone

  1. No dialogue!

    So that’s why your prose seemed different compared to other pieces that I’ve read. I finally figured it out.

    It’s perfect though, because you use lotsa descriptive and kinda deep words that are just right for narration. Personally, I think that’s why I find your poems more compelling. Word count is limited, and yet you still manage to get significant messages across while drawing in the readers’ interest in your writing.


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